tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4415491307557659483.post2235957186154881242..comments2012-06-06T11:56:47.637-07:00Comments on Life in Infrared: Introducing AndyLenorehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00438831003220950550noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4415491307557659483.post-42870442158980006112012-06-06T11:56:47.637-07:002012-06-06T11:56:47.637-07:00I'm livid with, Andy. Poignant and achingly we...I'm livid with, Andy. Poignant and achingly well done.Hannahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10124956200834969600noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4415491307557659483.post-65652582302965287232012-06-06T10:30:39.365-07:002012-06-06T10:30:39.365-07:00Good beginning. And you could go on from here...
...Good beginning. And you could go on from here...<br /><br /><a href="http://magicalmysticalteacher.wordpress.com/2012/06/05/only-in-our-dreams/" rel="nofollow">Red Door in Mexico</a>Magical Mystical Teacherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01853272111925075994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4415491307557659483.post-61853586358550810782012-06-06T09:22:19.010-07:002012-06-06T09:22:19.010-07:00Yes Andy sounds dreadful, but a nice beginning to ...Yes Andy sounds dreadful, but a nice beginning to an interesting story. Good writing.Myrna R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15088915165678737118noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4415491307557659483.post-66370585116240680222012-06-06T05:46:06.548-07:002012-06-06T05:46:06.548-07:00He he! He is a bit of a horror :P
The two lines ...He he! He is a bit of a horror :P<br /><br />The two lines there were actually written that way to be repetitive, as is the word 'tornado' and yes, it is the beginning of a small story that should get posted in the next few days, I just thought a story may be a bit much for folks used to a poem over at Carry On to take!! <br /><br />Thanks for all your kind words and help on this! I really appreciate it :-)Lenorehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00438831003220950550noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4415491307557659483.post-33453055603238193122012-06-06T05:35:13.885-07:002012-06-06T05:35:13.885-07:00OK...already I hate Andy...sounds like the beginni...OK...already I hate Andy...sounds like the beginning of a story...and reading further "About Me"...I discover it is the beginning...I will be interested to see what happens to "dear old Andy"<br /><br />One little idea...I felt the words "His voice" the 2nd time were too repetitive...Maybe something like "His screams cut into"...just an idea...George S Battyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15407137341843413701noreply@blogger.com